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How to Write a LinkedIn Headline: 5 Formulas With Examples

Your headline follows you everywhere on LinkedIn. Here are five formulas, with examples, for writing one that tells people who you help and how.

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Your LinkedIn headline is the line under your name. It shows on every post you publish, every comment you leave, every connection request you send and every search result you appear in. For most people who come across you, it is the only thing they read about you before deciding whether to read more.

The short answer

A good LinkedIn headline says who you help and how, in words a stranger would understand. Lead with the audience and the result, use the words your audience would search for, and cut the buzzwords. You have up to 220 characters, but the first few words matter most.

Why isn't a job title enough?

LinkedIn fills your headline with your current job title and employer unless you change it. “Senior Consultant at Smith & Co” tells people what you are called. It doesn't tell them whether you can help them, and it reads the same as thousands of other profiles. A headline that names an audience and a result gives a reader two quick questions to answer: am I that person, and do I have that problem?

5 LinkedIn headline formulas

The examples below are invented to show each pattern. Swap in your own audience, result and proof, and keep only claims that are true.

1. I help [who] [get what result]

The most direct formula, and the best default for consultants, freelancers and service businesses.

  • I help independent physiotherapy clinics fill their diaries without discounting
  • I help first-time managers in engineering teams run better one-to-ones

2. [Role] for [who] | [speciality]

Keeps a recognisable role but narrows who it's for. Useful when people search for the role itself.

  • Fractional CFO for UK SaaS start-ups | Fundraising models and board reporting
  • Brand designer for food and drink producers | Packaging that stands out on the shelf

3. [Result] through [method]

Puts the outcome first and the method second, which suits people with a distinctive way of working.

  • Cutting cloud bills for scale-ups through architecture reviews, not vendor switching
  • Winning back lapsed customers through plain, personal email

4. [Role] at [Company]: we [what the company does, for whom]

For employees and founders who want the company in the headline. The second half explains the company to people who've never heard of it.

  • Founder, Northgate Coffee: we supply independent cafés with locally roasted beans
  • Head of Customer Success at Brightfield: we help accountancy firms automate client onboarding

5. [What you do] + [proof you can stand behind]

Adds a specific, checkable reason to believe you. The proof must be true and something you'd be happy to be asked about.

  • Employment lawyer for tech start-ups. Advising founders on hiring and equity since 2014
  • Wedding photographer in the Lake District. Author of a guide to the region's venues

Which formula should you pick?

  • Founders: formula 4 if the company is the point, formula 1 if you are building a personal brand alongside it.
  • Consultants and freelancers: formula 1 or 3, because the client is buying a result.
  • Employees: formula 2 or 4, which keep your role clear while saying who you serve.
  • Job seekers: formula 2, with the role you want and the speciality that sets you apart.

What should you leave out of a LinkedIn headline?

  • Self-awarded labels such as “guru”, “ninja”, “visionary” or “thought leader”. Let other people decide that.
  • Vague adjectives: “passionate”, “results-driven”, “innovative”. They say nothing a reader can check.
  • Long strings of pipe-separated labels. Five labels dilute each other; one clear sentence lands.
  • Rows of emojis. They make the headline harder to read in search results and comment threads.
  • Anything that only makes sense inside your company, such as internal team names or acronyms.

Yes. The words in your headline help people find you when they search LinkedIn, so use the words your audience would type, not the ones you'd use internally. A prospective client is more likely to search for “bookkeeper for restaurants” than “financial operations partner”.

How to test a new headline

  1. Write three versions using different formulas, then read each one as a stranger would.
  2. Ask two people in your target audience which one makes them want to know more.
  3. Change your headline and leave it for 30 days. Changing it weekly tells you nothing.
  4. Compare profile views, connection requests and follows from the right people with the previous 30 days.

Do the rest of the profile too

The headline gets people to your profile; the rest decides what they do next. Our LinkedIn profile self-audit covers the photo, custom URL and the activity behind them.

Get your headline scored

VaaniCraft's profile rating, included on every plan and the free trial, scores your profile from 0 to 100 each week. The headline is worth 20 of those points. It's reviewed by AI for clarity, meaning whether it says who you help and how, and you get a suggested sharper version to start from. You still choose the words and make the change yourself on LinkedIn. Try it free and see your score.

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Frequently asked questions

How long can a LinkedIn headline be?

Up to 220 characters. You rarely need all of them: put the audience and the result in the first few words, because the headline is often shortened in comments, search results and on phones.

What makes a good LinkedIn headline?

A good LinkedIn headline says who you help and how, in plain words a stranger would understand. For example, “I help independent physiotherapy clinics fill their diaries without discounting” is clearer than “Marketing Consultant”, because it names an audience and a result.

Should I put my job title in my LinkedIn headline?

Only if people search for that title, and then add who you do it for, as in “Fractional CFO for UK SaaS start-ups”. A job title on its own tells people what you are called, not what you do for them.

Should I use emojis in my LinkedIn headline?

It's best not to. Emojis make a headline harder to scan in search results and comment threads, and they take up space that clear words would use better.

How often should I change my LinkedIn headline?

Change it when your work or focus changes, or to test a clearer version. When you do change it, leave it for about 30 days before judging it, and compare profile views and connection requests with the previous 30 days.

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